/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Could I get some feedback on my skin render? The line art isn't mine, hence why it isn't clipped to it properly, I feel like I'm close, but missing something. I put down the flats, roughly put in the shadows with pencil, transparent watercoloured it to give it a gradient effect, then made a multiply layer for the shadow below the skirt.

Animuheads here. Trying for a non cel-shaded render this time. The line art isn't mine, hence why it isn't clipped to it properly, I feel like I'm close, but missing something. I put down the flats, roughly put in the shadows with pencil, transparent watercoloured it to give it a gradient effect, then made a multiply layer for the shadow below the skirt.

I'd really appreciate any feedback, I really feel like I'm close to "getting it"