/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3572624
Nah it didn't put me down. I was surprised at first because I didn't really understand the erotic perspective, but I get it now. I really appreciate the feedback and recognise how valuable it is. Nobody can make it on their own steam.

>it's the melting ice cream and the blushing that resembles a giant bukkake load of jizz
Yeah, I didn't see that before. Now I can't unsee lol

>>3572431
I actually have some small criticism. I speak and write Japanese for my job, and whilst script was never my strongest area at school, the way you've written mononoke hime here is actually somewhat illegible at first glance. How you've written the character for woman in hime ( 女 ) actually resembles the se hiragana ( せ ), whereas the の's and the け look kind of weird too.

Here's a short 34 second video that'll teach you the stroke order for hime and will show you how to write it more authentically.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xKjtHqYilH4

Attached is how I'd personally write mononoke hime, but obviously my own script is a lot more modern (and non-native), and I'm not using a but I just wanted to give you an idea of how it should look.

By the way, in Japanese calligraphy the brush is called fude, and the ink sumi. If you use the terms in Google you should be able to find an appropriate brush for whatever software you use. Hope this helps.