/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6654428
>>6654433

mm yes, I think you guys summed it up pretty well. I stopped the coloring because I realized there were too many things to fix first but I'll keep the lighting in mind for the next try.

for the pose, I haven't found any good refs for the poseI had in mind. I wonder if something like picrel is better? exaggeration is harder to get right than proper anatomy lmao but I like what you did in yours