/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2721430
>you never listen
you might get better results out of your critiques if you put a sightly more effort to be accurate, not asking you to be friendly, but accurate
and put an effort to understand what you're giving crit to, it's not a finished pic, it's a sketch with some parts of it way more loosely because It's for testing where to go

if you take implications about how far from finished a sketch is you're gonna make bad judgements by routine

there's no render or accurate drawing on logan, just like the thing at the bg which is meant to be a centinel's giant forearm-hand, but I don't need anything else than that blob to compose the pic, lighting and color quickly

>>2721432
i'm not posting early steps to get told about something without any form/render work is lacking form/render work, I know that
that step is supposed to come on top of it, and it's not there yet

I could understand a critique about how I failed to do that step, but otherwise it seems a missunderstanding

>>2721435
I traced a pancake to do logan desu

>>2721438
it's meant to do so, ground or bg hasn't been drawn, just filled with shapes to establish everything early, early steps shouldn't be final unless you don't plan to improve it or you plan to just 1:1 copy it