/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2202390
I think you're foreshortening her right leg (our left) as if it was going away from us but it should be lying almost flat along the board she's sitting on. Try to find some sort off similar reference if you don't have any already.
>>2202211
A little line-weight goes a long way, give it some more thought before you go further or on your next piece.

>>2202159
See about setting up some perspective lines on your next attempt and find reference for the pose, you might as well see drawing smut as figure drawing + boners.

>>2199439
I'd prefer that but I think people get weirded out by bdsm and fantasy races enough already. No need to throw any (further) non-consensual elements in.

Call'n this done because I'm a lazybones.