/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6584190
I hope you don't mind, but I colored this to see what it'd look like. Often if I use a thin pen to draw, like what I think the pros do, I feel like my art is pretty lifeless, so I never get to the coloring phase. I wanted to see if coloring helps. Not really sure.

And I'm NOT saying I think you're line art is bad, btw.