/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2461503
hey, like the other anon said, there's a lot of empty space on the right side which could easily be filled up with the dragon. the figure's placement is also a little weird here, you've shoved him straight into the corner! giving him a little breathing room would help the composition i feel, and it would get rid of the nasty tangents his staff and feet are making with the edge of the painting.

here's my take on it. i tried to use the bridge and the rocks in the composition too, to try and pull attention to the dragon. i wasn't sure if i should spotlight the figure in the foreground or leave him in shadow, but it might be something to think about.