/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6354789
that shading on her lower cheek looks a lil awkward, but in general nicely done, specially that stomach area. don't forget some cast shadows between ear and hair, face and right shoulder, etc those are little gems that help sell the depth of the picture. if you use this for some background practice too it could be a really nice finished piece, can't think of anything for context besides her maybe washing herself in a lake or something

>>6354860
cute! linework seems a bit rushed though, watch out for having really thick lines 'inside' the sillhouette they detract from the focal points.

>>6354543
I'm liking all the big and lil shapes for her hair and pompoms, and there's a bit more gesture here too, good job anon. thanks for the feedback too, I did finish those two and got another comm for that same gnome character for a cute lil pinup.