/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>1823431

I had not realized that, thanks!

>>1823678

A lot of people complained yet very few gave actual advice. It's easy to say it looks like shit but it's way more valuable to point out why it looks like shit.

Finally while it's far from done I don't agree with you that this iteration isn't an improvement over what I posted there.

>>1823488
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>>1823700

Thanks!

>>1823564
Noice but to me the teeth should recede a bit more into the mouth, maybe consider adding more shadows in that area

>>1823535
It's a bit too soft, I would change the design of the bow too.

>>1823656
I'm 30 now

I'm currently trying to make this piece less tacky a more mecha like