/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6465737
>Style
It's muh style but the thing is muh style is shit , mostly just me simplifying stuff out of lazyness and forgetting shit because I learned it once, took breaks and didn't "recap" everything. Kind of difficult to tell what I forgot for me.
I usually just recap perspective because thats usually the first thing that stands out as "bad".
(The cure might just be to recap everything from scratch but I am afraid I will just end up in a cycle of recapping the same shit over and over , burning out , ad infinitum and not improving)

I could use some more realism studies and recapping old stuff like how to shade with a ballpoint pen brush better (or even better actually learn how to use normal people shading).
>Darker lines
Yea , they are a bit on the light side
>exaggerate your gesture more
Would say the gesture was ok in the sketch (pic rel) but fucked it up somewhere in the trransition from sketch to drawing.
(I assume it has to do with the "tent" boobs but idk)
>accept eternal beg
pls no :(
>Circle
Could haver used a less distracting color , she was meant for a profile picture kind of thing so I got lazy in the corners , could have used some more creative ways to hide it tho.

Thanks for the crit, much appreciate it.