/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4971140
>Specially on the sideview please
I'm not sure how this accommodates to your style, but for a more traditional animu style, I'd give her a more prominent bottom half of the head.
I would also push back her eyes somewhat and keep the transition from the nose to the lip simpler.
For the front view, there's two things.
First I think the eyers are too far apart (and maybe too vertical, I like to give them a bit of a tilt following the head's shape, but it's a matter of taste).
And second, while I've seen people pull off a somewhat square head structure quite well, I think yours would look better if the head got wider as you reach the forehead.
Finally, and this is not really a crit but, seeing the way you draw eyes, have you thought of doing her bottom eye lashes the way teshima nari does them? Because i think it would look better than a single line.
Pics for examples
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=5494519
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=5167954&tags=teshima_nari