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Took a quick swing at it. To summarize, your value range is too slim, color range is too slim, and the reason she looks a bit pillow shaded is you haven't localized your values and colors to specific places (ignoring the eyes, brows, eye lashes, hair etc) Also you could use some more sharp value/color transitions to contrast the broader transitions around her cheeks and forehead for example.

This is a good start though.

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