/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Sorry if lewd content isn't the focus of the thread, but I've always wanted to make doujins. I recently saw a draw request on another board and I wanted to try a sequence and finally make an attempt. The problem (on top of my art being bad) is that I have never done this before so I don't know how to go about paneling and sequences. My main problem at the moment is how do I convey growth in a panel gracefully (I can't settle on the 4th panel due to this). Any help and critique is appreciated, thank you.