/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3907678
It s great to see a more finished work from you here is what I can add.

I don't understand the way she is standing on the ground maybe she is leaning on the right leg and tiptoeing on the left?

I pushed the head to the right to put the neck under the jack as it seems to be disconnected from the head.

Reduced the forehead distance but it is still a lot. The eyes need some more distance between the, the area should be able to fit a 3rd eye between the two normal eyes that is a good rule of thumb.

Your hatching is nice and crispy and inking is really clean good job there! Please keep going you have potential!