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>>2853852
I'd say a huge problem is the jellyness of this person I don't feel weight or form. Just lines. Think about the inside. Draw cubes and rectangles. I know it will feel stiff but it will help. All the flowiness is fine once you understand how the object you are drawing reacts to it. Remember the keystones of a skeleton. Once you understand weight and form you can draw actual meaningful quick sketches. I attached a photo from a book by Hampton.