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>>6857675
oh DAMN this is so good and lovely!

>would love to hear more about her
in her world, children with vail (basically magic) are forcefully taken from families to serve as living batteries for the church to keep the lands warm. The best of those children are selected to serve as the Pontiff's entourage, which is a great "honor" but in exchange you give up your family and identity.

She is one of those Blessed kids, and the best of them so she serves as the Pontiff's main attendant and voice. She speaks for him since he is not very talkative. She is into the role and acts a bit smug and condescending of others, also tends to use old-sounding words when she talks. She is an antagonist in story pretty much since the Pontiff is one of the two main antagonists. Being selected, she used to be from a noble family (I don't know what was her original name but probably Ming-something.)

Currently on my I NEED TO IMPROVE stage, but I want to finish this chapter before I take measures.