/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3066541

This one is good! The lines could be smoother and more refined and you clearly need more practice, but the feeling isn't lost on the drawing as a whole.

>>3066561

Soften your linework and blend the colors together better and I feel like it would be 100x better. The lines stand out too much and the colors seem sploched together instead of blending together.


If anyone could steer my anatomy or proportions in the right direction I would be eternally grateful. Trying to practice upper body and midriffs but I don't want to settle into any bad habits. Thank you!

Doing my best, I've never really drawn a torso and midriff before so I would be grateful if anyone could steer me away from any mistakes I've made so far and not make them habits. Thank you!

I would critique something just to be helpful, but I feel like I might give someone bad advice as I'm still learning myself.