/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3134769
Hope my handwriting isn't too hard to read. in general it looks like you're struggling with turning objects in 3d space. it's hard but keep going! it's a useful skill to have.
practice with simpler shapes (cylinders, beans, squares, etc) and work your way up. You can also trace topography on top of photos to see how the body turns in real life, or try to draw the cube/cylinder of the pelvis and rib cage on top of a model so you can get a better sense for how it fits into the human figure. Keep practicing and pushing yourself.
In a few spots (especially around the neck) you've drawn the muscles incorrectly. Muscular anatomy can be intimidating, but if you break it down into areas of the body (arms, back, front torso, neck, etc) you can teach yourself everything you need to know in a couple weeks. It's also good practice for learning to think in 3d.