/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Sup beg, yesterday i failed to draw, it is OVER.

>>7122395
i wouldnt call it lighting when rest is vacuum, but it implies form and thats all what matters: its good enough. pro beg tip: make the void different color than the figure color for easy appeal gains: instead of 2 values you will suddenly have 3, that is 50% more for 2 mouse clicks
>>7122373
shoulder makes sense with large canvases and overhand grips. take it more as a suggestion instead of hard rule. also i recc picking up keys to drawing instead of that trash fire of a course. but who knows, maybe you will love the box spam
>>7122259
very cool
>>7122164
making linework... less random
>>7122096
>what I'm doing wrong so I can work on that
you haven't drawn enough kilometers of line from reference. less thinking, more drawing. the more the better, go to next KtD chapters and projects, copy all drawings from the book while you are at it
>>7122082
bad value range but it has SOUL
>>7122014
keys to drawing
>>7122010
looks alright
>>7122003
i would add glow effect to the moon and backlight rim to peach, but still... cute and i kneel
>>7121997
i kneel
>>7121971
that project (of the book) is very ambitious for beg. and on top you picked really hard scene to depict. move on (yes, the drawing is VERY beg)
>>7121926
i dont like how you didnt foreshorten the arm on right. typically in scenes like this you want to foreshorten (shorter) the other arm for depth gains. as drapery goes just yandex jeans and steal some reference for realistic folds
>>7121859
NICE
>>7121849
>is it easier to do shading with trad
instead of copium i recc keys to drawing, chapter about light
>>7121769
BOOBA