/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2677354
loose redline for the neck
>I probably made the neck too long
not necessarily, but the angle is too much, you made it bend too much (though i might have made it bend too little)
even irl nobody will bend their neck that hard for a pose. think about whats comfortable and natural. usually it'll work if you just follow the gesture of the spine without any extreme bends.

also, if you want to understand how the head turns, you gotta separate the the muscles in the front from the ones in the back. the way you drew this makes it seem like you think of the "neck" as one vague object.
just being aware of the sternocleidomastoid and the trapezius helped me a lot in understanding the neck from various angles