/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6492341
simple and effective, some lines like around the ribcage or under the abs being a little scratchy/wobbly look out of place, and I'm not sure the airbrushing is suited for this linework, try studying pro artists who do the hard-edged cell-shading. and study how they draw and render nipples, little beads can look "realistic" but not "idealistic" so making them look plump and soft is the usual way to make them sexy. careful with the hair highlights and strands looking a bit overcrowded and hard to read

>>6492338
very impressive! you're showing off the rendering chops there. i'd venture into studying the anatomy for the lower body in general, from other artists specifically who have interesting shapes and contrast of the round v tight contours of the stomach, hips, etc. also besides your starfire and southern girl works which have appealing expressions there's a lot of placid or barely smiling faces which have their place in some contexts, but for others some 'slutty eyes', smirks and head tilts can add a lot of nuance
I can't help but wonder if the background would be so dark if her and the wall are so brightly lit but that's minor.

>>6492128
these are great studies, you've got great hue variance in places, a lot of forms look great, I think they need some confident hard vs soft edges in areas, better brush economy to avoid the muddy look and loosening up a bit and working on shape appeal (for shadows, highlights, etc) rather than making them exactly like the reference. maybe where you're going "wrong" is only doing studies from photos rather than from other artists work as well, and that would help with everything I've mentioned. you've trained your observational skills quite well and it shows, now show us you can be less "realistic" but way more appealing (unless you're only going for realism)

>>6492110
cute, simple, now challenge yourself with gradually more interesting poses and do lots of hand studies, they really get more intuitive with practice