/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>1545055

Pff fine, your problem is that you're copying shapes without understanding the underlying form and relationships. So a lot of errors creep in without you being aware.

Here's a quick and dirty correction (which is likely to still a lot of errors, so it is pretty useless actually, red crosses are big no nos).
But I don't expect you'll learn that much from it, since can't just copy the shapes again without understanding the full why. So do skeletal studies, look at how the muscles are attached and how they are shaped. That will fix all the problems you're having here.