/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

I don't know if I should be posting here or /beg/, but I think I'll get better advice here.
I'm working on concepts for a webcomic. It's an autobiographical slice-of-life, and it's about living with mental illness (t. schizo). Which of these two examples would work better for a comic like that?
I'm able to comfortably draw in both styles, so I'm willing to go either way. I just don't know which one of these readers would like to look at more.