/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3886154
Here's my new sketch (it was made before I saw your redline) trying out the method in the animebook.

I still think the box method of training is stupid, because it's completely out of context.
The method in the box doesn't literally use boxes, and more importantly it's in context and fun, so would like to know what you think, of the method in the book and my new sketch.

And with your box grinding method I'm not able to reach my deadline.

Let me know anon, I appreciate the spoonfeeding, although the board's literally meant for art critique.