/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>7122219
Still farther from where you were before

I think OP's art is disgustingly ugly.

Yes, I'm an animefag, but as a kid I grew up surrounded by Western productions and very little contact with anime - in fact, I hated the applauded Saint Seiya.

Even back in my single digits, I would get X-Men comics and be utterly confused by the grittiness, the faces done by characters, constantly looking like they're taking a shit.
I'd have no interest in the art because it all seemed static, even when there was a lot of movement going on.

I also got some comics by Disney, from Duck Donald, Mickey et co, and they were equally lifeless. I couldn't keep my attention span on them. And I was a bookworm who'd read 2 books a week, plus play a lot of videogames, comics should be a breeze.

I did enjoy Tintin, Waldo and Asterix books, though.
And I thought Swat Katz looked awesome, although I've always thought Thundercats, He-man and what-have-you were uninteresting or just plain ugly.

>>6109263
I thought that they were just sending a copy paste text so i didn't want to post mine that it's
>We noticed your Story Structure skills... We can see the excitement in your story! To fully make the most of the manga medium, continue to study how best to build the narrative to an exciting conclusion.

What does that means? I mean i'm now very aware of the mistakes that i made and that's honesly pushing me down since i have been procrastinating a lot for not being in the right mood and now i'm anxious that i will not have the enought time to do the entry and fix the mistakes that i made

>just wake up at fuck you o'clock in the morning bro it's ez
I don't know why this never works for me, I sleep through all of my alarms even if I went to bed at 9pm. I just naturally wake up at 7 something and by then I have to go to work.

>>4482664
>Can't wait to see it finished!
Ooof

>>4373620

>patreon doing okish
>stops growing