/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4556159
Not a bad attempt. There are some things to look at, and pay more attention to next time - or to keep working on this.
One: hues. They need more unification - look at the attached photo, see how his are more unified? (Marc Bohne, FYI) That's what this needs - the browns and greens of the ground need just a touch of the blue of the sky to unify it more. A scene like this wouldn't have vivid greens like that, color is more washed out in fading light.
Second, detail. The lack of any detail in the field is jarring to the higher level of detail in the trees. And, the trees could use some more refining, in the closer ones - and some rimlight/highlights at the top. Texture can just be the illusion of it - look at the attached - he's using very loose brush strokes, but is still giving the eye enough data to think "field" and "trees". What you have looks like green and brown snow, or sand.
Finally, invest in a fan brush. The clouds can be saved. let it dry, and add some more layers of paint. Clouds are fun to paint, so give it a shot - these aren't credible, but fixing them would raise the success level of the panel considerably.
You're going in the right direction, just start paying more attention to things like color composition and unity, brushstrokes, and detail levels.