/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2118221
There's lots of movement which looks cool, it's just that your anatomy/perspective isn't fluid enough to match it. From the shoulders up, she's facing forward, but her chest is facing 3/4 right, and then her ass is facing left/out. In the red line I tried pushing her right (or left?) arm back, because she has this awkward movement where both of her arms are going forward. Remember that the pectoral muscle (where boobs are) sort of connect with the deltoid muscle (shoulder muscle). Her butt is really low, and if that giant mass isn't dress, and is actually her legs, try to imagine how weird it looks with her slim upper body and fat lower body. I wasn't really sure what you were going for, so I just drew a twisting motion with the lower body, that at least gives you an idea anatomically what it should look like.