/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>5152994
And I'm telling you right now, you're wasting time and accomplishing nothing. Your underlying forms and anatomy aren't sound to begin with and you're not learning anything by caring about all this "clean sketch" stuff. Your lines are too thin to even matter, too uniform and flat to be interesting, and too monotonous and unsupporting to create the appearance of form, weight, and value.

Use your lines to define things, not just as a clean edge for your flat colors. And spend more time on learning anatomy and construction.