/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6521570
Here's my two second fix, though if I were to invest more time in it, I'd most likely go looking for a strong model pose reference, rather than trying to wing it.

The major issue is the left shoulder. For the head to be that far forwards, the left shoulder would need to also come forwards, since the right one is being pulled back so far. The shoulders have to twist along with the torso. So the left shoulder should be right under the torso, and it looks like you made the arm way to long, so I pushed it in, making the elbow also tucked under the body since the upper arm shouldn't be that long.

I think it's salvageable, though it is a tough pose to do without strong reference.