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>>6536782
np man top taste
judging from ref i can also suggest to practice with gesture drawing from it, she does a pretty long torso and short legs, but you can notice her hands still reach down to her mid-tigh area if she were to relax, the difference I see in your drawing its missing more of action of the raised shoulders
I didnt take much on this please take this image with a grain of salt. did a quick exercise in getting a feel of the flow in your reference, it doesnt replace a proper anatomy study you have to know the layers of the skeleton, muscles and fat and how they all add on top underneath the skin. but for exploratory purposes it helps me in trying to locate the downplanes, locate landmarks and to get a flow from them, your cross hatching may also benefit from it since it helps in economizing the amount of lines in order to enhance the sensation of volume and what directions of the lines to use, looking at your drawing and comparing I see your ribcage is situated differently when I trace over the reference