/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Trying to figure out how to tighten ip the lines. I just migrated to digital from traditional, and it’s been rough. With pencil and paper, my lines are tighter, but maybe its the smoothness of the glass, my pen is sliding everywhere.

Of course, anything else that sticks out, I’d also like a chance at fixing.

Not doing coomer stuff, just erotic pinups if there’s a difference

Not coomer shit just doing erotic pinups, if there’s a difference...

I want to start tightening thing up, but idk where to begin... wondering if anyone would suggest where to start from here.

Most of my stuff ends up rough like this, and when I try to tighten up my lines, i always makes it worse.

Should i sketch out how i want the line art to look? Ive seen some do that faux line-weight varying stuff sketched out. Not sure if it works here.

Just looking to grow some more, figure out where things are so i can improve