/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4972423
>first time I enter this board
Friendly advice, the board is full of shitpost and frustrated anons trashing on other artists, don't get engaged in those threads or you'll end up wasting a surprising amount of time.
>I had no idea that this general existed
It's fairly new I think.

As for the drawing itslef, I really really like it. It's really cute and cheerful. I don't think I can really redline it, but here's something you'll hopefully find useful. I would lower down her breasts a bit and maker her torso shorter, while making her legs longer.
It's obviously a matter of preference, I like the "legs are half of the height" rule but don't expect everyone else to agree.
I also think her legs could have a more defined shape. And maybe her hair could be wider at the height of her ears, something like this.
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=5367882&tags=jougasaki_rika