/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>5162816
>>5162883
Did a quick recreation of the pose so you have a reference of what I was suggesting.

Collarbone is the bone on the top of the shoulder, when you are not a skeletor it will look like...well...a collar around the base of your neck, so wrap it around your neck like collar will look more natural.

On right hand because the deltoid muscle, it will bulge up slightly near the shoulder. And having your upper arm in that angle would sort of suggest your forearm is rotated 90 degrees on the joint as you can see from the elbow.

Your leg is connected to the pelvic, so the inner thigh line is not a smooth line linking to your waist.
I chose a slightly more top down angle so you can see roughly what's happening at the crotch area.

Of course for drawing you can choose where to exaggerated and where to tone down, so take what you would. Hope this helps, cheers.