/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2904453
Nice start! I think this would be vastly improved by doing two things.

1) correcting the proportions. Some things like the hairline or the placement of the ear are off and it really takes away from the piece.

2) Being more specific with edge control. You already have a nice variety of hard and soft edges, but you can choose more wisely which ones are hard or soft and to what degree. For example, the outline of her forehead and nose where it meets the background has a uniformly very crisp edge along it. If you think about it though, the edge is determined by the form, so the forehead which is a broader more gradual turning of form will be softer, and the nose which is a thin tube with a sharp curve will have a harder edge.

Otherwise I made some small value changes and some small drawing corrections like the way the neck and torso connect.