/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3318725
Sorry this isn't manga, but I want to face the anxiety I have at showing it to /ic/.
This is my comic
http://endgamewastaken.the-comic.org

I've only gotten around 80 pages or so done (it operates on a buffer, so if I miss the deadline I still have pages uploading) but if you are interested and read it, please consider taking the time to leave some feedback.

A few things to preface.
-At the start, it's incredibly rough. I mean VERY rough, since I started this around a year of seriously studying art, so it takes a while for it to get presentable. Chapter 2 is where the art style more resembles the current one.
-the website is dogshit in aesthetic, I haven't taken the time to make it presentable, so it's the bog standard comicfury theme.
-I'm not skilled, at all, so in order to make my weekly deadline, there are a LOT of corners cut, things like the leaves on a tree being defined just by the silhouette, with no internal lines, characters getting incredibly janky when far away from the camera, simplistic linework, flat 3 tone monochromatic color scheme.
-When I say "flat" I mean "flat." There's things in this art style I'm pursuing, that are deliberately visibly "2D" because they only work in 2D. Sally's hair is a prime example of this.
-The pace drags in the third chapter, and even then it's taken me 10 pages to get them out of the warehouse/gym/dungeon, in the chapter. Some of those ten pages haven't been released yet.

I know it's best to just leave it on its own, but I really think I need to say all of that before showing it to /ic/.
Thanks for reading all of this.