/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3662144
Well, then the rest I would still apply it, you lost those interesting or more natural points (like the jawline) when rendering it. Hmm, I would say for a man the eyes are a tad big proportionally speaking. But without seeing the reference I'm just guessing. I picked some from google to compare.

Okay check the pic and notice how highlights are subtler and more broken, clumped in different masses. Yours are a bit too regular and following small strokes. They are also quite light in value, it almost makes him look as if he had grey hair, which could be also.