/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3289732
Took your advice and lowered them (slightly) and I think its better, thanks.
>>3289744
It's not really supposed to be that relaxed (torso), I imagined her back a little stretched (she's leaning back a bit and extending her spine) to look at the rifle, I was trying to give the pose an inquisitive feel, if that makes sense.

Thanks lads.