/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2569550
You're not making progress very fast.
But worse, I feel that v3 looked better than v5, it seemed to have more potential because your rendering is quite weak.

But before all that you should start over the buildings and things in proper perspective. Like the car in the front, it looks horrible. But all buildings look incorrect.

That said, I like the comp, even if it feels a bit cramped, it could be a great piece.