/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

guys I am really fucking lost on this one

I feel like my art is going no-where
Ive started to read loomis the last couple of days, but im just not sure where to go from here. I mean what am I missing? where do I need to go what do I need to do. I can post more "finished" samples if you'd like.

what do I need to focus on? just everything? Idk if you could even give me a sequence of steps that would be really great. I just feel really lost on how to improve.