/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Does this pose make sense? Does something look broken?
>>6802392
It died.
For critique, her midsection is a little confusing - the skindentation on her belt reads like an additional abdomen section to me.
>>6801731
I think it would be lewd if the bra had some sort of lace texture, visible underwire, etc. to flesh out the transparency.
>>6803756
I appreciate offbeat designs in a dating sim. One thing to think about is color. Not only does a "signature color" make a franchise character more recognizable, but the color scheme can give us an idea of their personality. Just food for thought, I think your shapes are good.