/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Not super happy with this one, I think I'm too beholden to the reference. Doesn't really feel like there a focal point in this to me, probably should have lightened the rocks around the gate. More atmospheric perspective was needed on the background hill and bridge, its merging with the closer hill, I make this mistake all the time. Thoughts appreciated.

>>6463000
Nice heads! They're all nice, I'm sure I'm pointing out the obvious (and I find this angle very difficult) but 52 is looking a bit off. I think its the nose position.

>>6462821
Keep going lad, draw what you see, not what you think you see.

>>6462495
Not bad at all! I think darkening up the eye lid on the left (his right) eye would make this even better.

Not super happy with this one, I think I'm too beholden to the reference. Doesn't really feel like there a focal point in this to me, probably should have lightened the rocks around the gate. More atmospheric perspective was needed on the background hill and bridge, its merging with the closer hill, I make this mistake all the time. Thoughts appreciated.

>>6457047
Nice line work, anatomy of the skulls looks a bit off to me.

>>6457368
Really nice, I love the clouds. If I HAD to find a bit of criticism I'd say maybe the large cresting waves form isn't making much sense/not similar to waves I've seen in real life, hard to describe just doesnt look right to me.

>>6457927
Splat, poor little guy. Squeeze some darker values in there.

>>6460893
Cute, would pet and have my arm ripped of by.

>>6463067
Coming along great!