/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2933297

doxy has something about it

>>2610964

>>2441356
Basically this >>2441401
His hair has no form. It looks like a grey blob-- especially the braid thing.
I don't understand how it sits on the head.
Please stop relying solely on multiply for shading.
His torso is abnormally small.

>>2441401
The hand feels wonky. No pronounced wrist?
What is that squiggle above the ear? A hat?
Horns?

>>2441600
No amount of new technique can explain your total lack of understanding of anatomy.
I see you hid the hands which is a major giveaway.
The eye is drawn at the wrong angle.
You've drawn it as though you were seeing a face from the front rather than the profile.
Finally, stop using the darker/lighter version of a color for shading/coloring. It makes the whole thing look muddy and boring.

>>2441629
Wew lad your anatomy is fucked.
>Head doesn't sit on neck correctly
>Short baby-carrot thighs/legs
>Unnatural/stiff posture
Basically, look at actual bodies and learn from that.
This was done purely from your head and you have no
understanding of underlying construction.


I've included an info pic on drawing dicks btw.
It's made by doxy

>>2213441

Is that strap-on? It really needs some redesigning. Also that right leg looks a little short/stumpy.