/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3851488
You should post a comparison pic, too. All I can say is that you should probably learn perspective and form first, because the cast shadows are inconsistent. Also, I think you should aim for a material(like matte) before doing values. Values are heavily dependent on their materials. For example, metals have a small threshold, whereas matte has a larger threshold (for light and dark). pic related for example. After deciding on a material, make/draw/paint it consistent across objects.