/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Hello beg. Some more copies and the bottle exercise. I still feel like I regressed a lot.

>>6803869
I am experiencing this right now.
>>6803850
Looks very beg. There is no texture on the walls or the floor, no furniture, light and shadow are not prominent enough, proportions on the background characters are fucked, etc. Study more.
>>6803835
>>6802991
Looks impressive.
>>6803794
Your original sketch robe looks like goo, the later one looks painted over in a messy way. Consider adding some texture to the lava, it's got these half-molten folds in it, more and less heated areas... just look at the photos.
>>6803459
Your horse drawings always have a very unsettling effect on me. Perhaps this is what you intended all along.
>>6803426
>>6803434
lol
>>6803386
Looks competent. Your skill is still good, congratulations.
>>6803336
Your legs look like they're longer than torso + head. Re-check your proportions?
>>6803262
Cool parrot.
>>6802987
Good studies. Keep it up.
>>6802551
>incapable of trad
ngmi
>>6801591
I kept looking for the monster the guy was imitating in the background but found nothing. It is an atmospheric image, good job.
>>6801508
Eyes could be cuter but it is a neat masked girl, thumbs up.
>>6801386
It looks like you made random areas darker or lighter. You should probably study shadows in a structured way.
>>6801343
Clean lines. Creepy. You succeeded.
>>6801247
>you being unhappy with copies means you are leveling up observation skill. that is good
I think I just became shit from drawing too little rather than improved my observation.
>>6801128
Probably. I agree with the other anon and Pawell, your drawing is soul.
>>6800997
I am not yet allowed to use eraser by Keys to Drawing but it makes sense. The only problem is if a mistake is made, you erase not only the wrong line, but lines nearby as well, and also lighten the values, which require careful building up again before you can continue putting down texture. Such is the pain of trad.