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The background is looking very flat and plain in comparison to the foreground. You removed a lot of the icebergs that helped create depth, and the clouds don't have much depth to them either. Sort of looks like a textured brush of a lighter color swiped once across a flat dark background color. It'd be nice if you spent a little time at least giving the clouds a bit of form too. One more thing I think could help add tension and a sense of foreboding would be adding a splash of red or orange or some bright color like that in the middle of the darkening clouds.

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