/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

here's a drawing I did tonight. I want to get back into painting but with a more loose and graphic sort of style to match the way I draw better. let me know what you think
>>5099040
this looks really nice, the colours really pop from the thumbnail. it reminds me a little bit of Akihiko Yoshida's work with the heavy hatching and loose watercolour wash underneath. I think you could maybe darken the values on the thigh so that the hand with the pointing finger sticks out more, right now it kind of gets lost in to the green-on-green.
>>5098285
this is pretty cute, I was confused by what's happening around the waist but then I realized it's just a remnant of another sketch overlapping the main drawing lol. I think there might be a more appealing solution to simplify the face and snout from a front view, check out some artists you like with a similar style study how they approach it. I find the whiteout interesting too!