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>>	Anonymous Tue May 31 03:06:58 2016 No.2543173 [View] File: 332 KB, 900x544, tuonela.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Used to draw, now just painting. http://lworbit.tumblr.com/

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 28 15:07:29 2016 No.2461841 [View] File: 332 KB, 900x544, tuonela.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Oh what the hell. http://lworbit.tumblr.com

Anonymous Sun Mar 27 15:30:07 2016 No.2460164 [View]
File: 332 KB, 900x544, tuonela.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>2460141
horrible composition and colour balance. Start from the symmetry and weight, everything is in the middle and those are squeezed by rocks(?). Very strong lines are pointing towards girl.

Those lights from flying things, they make a really strong and disturbing composition. Perspective destroys depth and your lights are everywhere. Whole lower half is opposite colours, you need to refine your palette and add contrast. Lacks all the whites and blacks.

But good that you made a whole picture. Now just try something else and learn from this.

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