/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3144941
Naf, I hate manga and I don't usually post in these threads, but I like comics in general and I like Castlevania a lot, so the cover for your manga tricked me into reading it.
I quite liked it, and as a fellow comic book artist I wanted to give you my feedback. Let me be your editor for this thread, be prepared for a wall of text. I tried being as thorough as I could without taking forever to respond, and I hope you can use something from it.

I'll start with my impressions while reading it:
First page "alright, boring exposition”, then the twist hit me "oh no.... this is weaboo shit", but "ok, this is kinda funny", and then that guy burst through the wall and I was sold on this loli vampire hunt.
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