/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3770394
>>3770589
No

Stop chicken scratching, use confident and fluid strokes for your lines

Your anatomy and constructions are off and you're trying to draw contours instead of the form itself.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pa_2rL1K1mg

Watch Vilppu to understand how to convey the 3d forms of the figure. Start by copying models like in the video.

Keep practising, everyone struggles with figure drawing at the start.

>>2547390
>>2547381
if you go to my userpage you can click on the links that aren't marked nsfw and you'll get most of the nondegenerate stuff. I use the figure drawing vids New Masters Academy puts out on youtube.