/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

I think her face is fine, I would bring her eye and the corner of her mouth up a bit but that's it. I think there are more problems with her body and the perspective there and that becomes more apparent when you take away everything else and just look at the simplified lines here. Her clavicles seem to be a bit low, the right boob and armpit should be higher and I'd make her shoulder/trapezius more rounded and bring her shoulder and arm in a bit. Other than that, it's a nice picture. I like your style.